Graphic Design Draft

Design Process

During the creation of my draft graphic design piece, I allowed for the images themselves to direct me in how I wanted to present the message of “Let’s take the road less traveled.” While my singular design consists of multiple layers, images, and text, as a whole, it brings the viewer to a road of uncertainty and adventure.  If we were to dismantle my graphic design it would consist of three photographs that I took on a trip to the Pacific Palisades in Oregon; one captures a majestic sand wall and all its natural textures, the other a winding, bare, almost ghostly road, and finally, a photograph of mountains that sit above water with a beautiful clear sky. Combined, I’d like to think the image is that of a majestic road beyond and through the mountains, leading my viewer to our next destination of uncertainty and adventure. I tried to align my design’s intention with the Gestalt theory in mind, which our readings describe as “…an image consisting of numerous elements, that “while we form impressions “…derived from the individual objects, but “has a separate meaning based on the unified whole.” 

Elemental Significance

While different images completely, the three photographs I chose to include in the draft project share visual similarities of warmth in tones that I found visually pleasing when blended together. The combined warmth of the photographs provided an intentional invitation to a particular place in time: a warm, dry, silenced, unventured land. Paradicing.com’s purpose is to expose and invite my viewers/readers on a journey of uncertainty, discovery, and excitement through food, travel, and wellness, which brings me to the text included in my graphic design: “Let’s take the road less traveled.” For the purposes of advertising, my website is aligned with the core of adventure. This idea of taking “the road less traveled,” has been my guiding light in life and has aligned with the lifestyle that I lead as a flight attendant and mother. So, it only made sense that my draft design includes this saying, which pays tribute to Robert Frost’s, The Road Less Traveled.

Technical Execution of the Design

          I started this design with three photographs as described above: Mountains, Sand wall, and winding road. The mountains have this boldness in color, which immediately led me to have in the foreground. Using what I have learned from our previous tutorials, I placed the three images in the order that I wanted them to be layered. Removing the sky from above the mountains with the magnetic lasso tool, I placed the mountains in the front. I then cropped each photo so that they were aligned to where I wanted them to be layered. I used the sand wall photograph as a texturing layer to the image to give it a blending and dreamy effect. However, I wanted the railing of the road to take precedence in the completed design to move the viewer’s eyes toward the dreamy road. To accomplish this, I selected my sand wall layer (while having the road layer visible) and used the magnetic lasso to trace the road rail and removed that selected portion from the sand wall layer. This brought the road rail forward for the viewer while keeping the road textured and dreamy. During the layering process, I lowered the opacity of the sand wall over the road to have it melt into the image to create a more seamless transition between both photographs. I intentionally, left the opacity of the mountains to 100% so that it remained a bold element to my design. While the design includes a lot of intentional placements and editing, the overall product is seemingly simple, clean, and in tune, which is why I decided to keep the text as simple as possible. While the text includes great meaning and pulls the elements of design together, I really wanted the photographs to speak for themselves. Additionally, the format of my website is that of a clean, minimalistic design and I wanted my design to align with the website.

5 responses to “Graphic Design Draft”

  1. Ashley,
    First off, I really love the meaning behind your project. I think the overall feel of your photo is welcoming and warm, with a lovely invitation for others to explore their own ‘road less traveled’. I have to say, your photoshop skills are very great, because I couldn’t even tell you had blended three elements together! I think that takes a lot of hard work and skill in this area, so a job well done. With that being said, I also think that some of the elements might get a little bit lost, because of the color scheme. I might try bringing up the brightness and hues of the mountains to help them pop a little bit more, and maybe zoom them in a bit to show their detail. Next, I might suggest using the eraser tool on the road to bring that to focus as well. Although I do like that it is subtle, I think having it show just a bit more will overall enhance the theme of your creation. I think you did a great job and I look forward to seeing the finished product!
    Mercedes

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  2. Ashley, I really love your graphic design project and feel like you accomplished the concept of simplicity, allowing the viewer to dream for themselves where the road may take them. The images work well together, and the colors are very soothing. I think it was a great idea to include the sand wall image as a texturing layer in your design. It gives the design a nice dimension. My two suggestions would be to consider removing the white highlighting behind the text. It draws more attention to the text, and it may work more with the simple nature you are going for if it was removed. I wonder if you could do a simple text effect instead or just keep the text as is. Next, I would slightly boost the color of the road using an adjustments layer, so it is clearer as your idea is to guide the viewer’s eye to the road. Awesome work! Excited to see your completed design.

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  3. Aloha Erin,

    Thank you for your feedback! I am so glad to have a fresh set of eyes to review my image. I agree, I hadn’t noticed the road being so faded into the background before. I think I may use the lasso tool again and remove some of the layering sand wall and have the road pop a bit. I agree, I was having trouble finding a text option that I liked, while I’d like to keep it a clean and simple theme, I want the viewer to be able to read it. I am hoping to find another text tool to accomplish this in my final draft.

    Warm Mahalo,
    Ashley Abordonado

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  4. Self-critique comment

    After reviewing the comments from my peers, I was able to see my graphic design draft with a pair of new eyes. While they agree that my image is aligned with the Gestalt Theory and keeps to my intention of simplicity, there is room for improvement. Emily suggested that I bring the road more to the forefront as the road is a key element in which ties my graphic design together in “taking the road less traveled.” I could not agree more. I hadn’t noticed how faded the image of the road was in comparison the overall graphic design. My intention, moving forward, in correcting this would be to use the magnetic tool around the “road” layer, while selecting the sand wall layer, and remove the transparent sand wall from the image to highlight the road.

    Additionally, Emily pointed out that I may want to remove the brush design behind the text to keep with my simplistic theme and let the photographs speak better to my intended message. I could not agree more. Admittedly, I had a difficult time figuring out what I wanted to do with the text: placement, letter head, and color. While I want to keep it a clean and simple theme, I want the viewer to be able to read it. I am hoping to find another text tool or letterhead to accomplish this in my final draft.

    Finally, I would like to work towards enhancing the layout of my blog so that it is more aesthetically pleasing. I created a tagged photo section of my digital design draft that looks amazing on my homepage; however, when you click on the blog itself there is a massive, displeasing view of my graphic design prior to my actual blog post. I would like to figure out how to remove the tagged image from the top of my blog but keep it linked onto my homepage.
    Thank you to everyone who had contributed to my feedback comments in my blog. I truly appreciate your time and insight.

    Warm Mahalo,
    Ashley Abordonado

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  5. Hey there Ashley,
    Firstly, wow! Your blog is amazing and tells the story you’re trying to portray beautifully. Your goal of making it minimalist, aligning with your website, and expressing the feel of the atmosphere you traveled has screensful transferred through your design. Your design just looking at it made me look closer and travel my eyes through the graphic, once I stopped to read it all came together which I think is the beauty of your graphic. It’s simple but very meaningful like a piece of art. In the end I realized my eyes were traveling through different roads, appreciating the unfamiliarity and then the feeling of comfort when having the sight of words that acts as a guide to where I am. You incorporated the different locations well, although my only critique would be to bring out the light canon more in the photo and make the main road pop out a little more. Other than that your use of layering tells the story of your blog in a beautiful way.

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